Famous Mortimer Posted January 22, 2010 Posted January 22, 2010 You're just jealous that you haven't got the control of characters that he has. He's creating pictures with words that resonate in my mind.
Paid Members Tommy! Posted January 22, 2010 Paid Members Posted January 22, 2010 as for the big chicken. all i can say is that comes from my nan who always says "I ve done you a big Chicken". my mate still says it when she cooks for her kids It wasn't a knock, it just tickled me. Encase it seemed like a knock. Beastmaster is on Skull Island, studying the giant apes there. Stingray is now running an electronics firm I love that Beastmaster is studying King Kong while Stingray is managing Dixons.
Paid Members SpursRiot2012 Posted January 22, 2010 Paid Members Posted January 22, 2010 Come on guys, there's a whole bunch of really talented writers on here. Why not give him some advice?
Loki Posted January 25, 2010 Posted January 25, 2010 When are we getting this audiobook version of Anglo Force? More Radders goodness. How to write the classic walk-and-talk The leader of the Black Squadron, Mother Nature, and her new second in command, the Grim Reaper, walked through the cold, dark, damp caves of northern Wales... ...
Loki Posted October 29, 2010 Posted October 29, 2010 Mortimer, I demand the autovox version of this that you promised. Just diving into Anglo-Force again has had me in stitches.
darkship Posted October 29, 2010 Posted October 29, 2010 Dude, you need to use proper spelling and grammar or my interest in your writing will collapse like a flan in a cupboard. If you don't know how/can't be bothered then get someone else to do it. There's probably some great stuff in there, but I only got to Paragraph 4 before quitting entirely. I enjoyed the Snoop plane thing. Of course I had a novel published this year (see signature) and am now going to present one of my own stories for assassination at the hands of the UKFF here (this one is a half-decade old now, mind).
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