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Ok tne. Gaping_Gash_of_Joy

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Now I know people are going to tell me what a bad place this is to ask this but I've been on this board long enough to work out what's real or not. My friends and I have been working on a few comedy sketches and I was interested in getting the opinions of people who don't know us. We're a work in progress.

 

Anyway, here's the link:-

 

http://www.youtube.com/user/ClipboredUK?feature=mhee

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Now I know people are going to tell me what a bad place this is to ask this but I've been on this board long enough to work out what's real or not. My friends and I have been working on a few comedy sketches and I was interested in getting the opinions of people who don't know us. We're a work in progress.Anyway, here's the link:-http://www.youtube.com/user/ClipboredUK?feature=mhee

Some of the ideas are good, such as the daily mail/uncle ben skit but I didn't find myself laughing at any of the videos. I think there's something in the dialogue and the delivery that just isn't firing.
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