Shameless
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Championship Wrestling's Tony Givens & Robbie Cassidy get into a fight with John Hawkins' KMF Inc. at the Project Downfall CD Release Party at Ireson's Pub in Bristol, TN.
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Worst worked punches ever?
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DDP gets jobbed out to Taker's wife:
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0MfMotvp2Wc
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And they say he was wasted in WWE.
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The Iron Shiek goes nutty:
FSM Thread
in UKFF: Classifieds
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First off, I gotta agree that this month's issue is a vast improvement all round. From the grammar, to the writing, to the thought behind the articles. Much better, and well worth the money.
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However, there's still the odd thing that tends to grate on me.
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For instance, on page 8 there's an article entitled "TNA's UK Home Closes". In the sub-title bit it says "Impact currently without a home". Then in the first sentence of the article it starts with "TNA Impact found itself without a home in the UK this month".
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So that's 3 uses of the word "home" in the first 3 sentences. I think we got the idea by then, you know! I'm possibly nitpicking a little, but that kind of thing tends to grate on me.
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Also there's still a fair few spelling-mistakes and clunky, poorly-written sentences. For instance, in the Bret Hart interview (which was very good) the writer uses the word "quiet" instead of "quite". Not once either, but 2 or 3 times. Sorry, but that's just poor.
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Anyway, besides those things, I'd recommend this month's issue. A definite improvement over the joke that was the past editor's "effort". I swear that bloke didn't even bother reading the thing before he sent it out. The absolute nadir probably being the Sheamus interview, which had more glaring mistakes than I've ever seen in a national publication.